Heating up

 

Fiery red invades

the sun freckles his face, hot

burning her to shreds

 


Hi guys, hope you enjoy this haiku! It was written for Haiku Horizon’s Spot Prompt

I did a slightly more “abstract” take on the prompt. So instead of using the word “spot” as a noun, or even a verb, I decided to incorporate the image of spots. In this case, the freckles on his face are “spots.” Let me know what you think!

Comments, love, and critique are much appreciated ❤

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10 Comments

  1. Lovely! I have never tried to write a haiku before – I may give it a go! I admire anyone who can work from a prompt – my mind seems to go blank!

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